Wow, the background is fantastic! I find it so hard to get any lighting right yet you nailed it on multiple surfaces!
This type of artwork is really your thing man! Really nice!
The side face needs work... you need lumps for the lips (I usually have the bottem half sticking out more then the top half of a face... take a look at some anime examples and you'll see what I mean)
The ear usuallyis between the nose and the eye, and less pointy...
hair seems fine, perhaps only a few edits on the top of it...
as with the energy trails, perhaps you need more.... and brighter in the center
to top it all off and add a gloomy effect, add a radial or something, draw focus to the eye crying (Use the alpha channels, radial the hell out of it)
Hm... perhaps I should start uploading my stuff....
Yer I know what you are saying but I was not trying to focus to much on the tear
the tear itself is just a drop to show some emotion.
as for the ear I was trying something different so I deliberate drew it that low
but thanks for the constrictive criticism
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