You will pay for this(Closeup) Yup
The side face needs work... you need lumps for the lips (I usually have the bottem half sticking out more then the top half of a face... take a look at some anime examples and you'll see what I mean)
The ear usuallyis between the nose and the eye, and less pointy...
hair seems fine, perhaps only a few edits on the top of it...
as with the energy trails, perhaps you need more.... and brighter in the center
to top it all off and add a gloomy effect, add a radial or something, draw focus to the eye crying (Use the alpha channels, radial the hell out of it)
Hm... perhaps I should start uploading my stuff....